I remember staring at my half-finished novella draft three years ago wondering why I'd chosen this awkward middle-child of fiction. Too long for a short story, too short for a novel - what was I thinking? Then I actually finished the thing and wow, what a ride. Turns out learning how to write a novella became my favorite creative challenge.
What Exactly Defines a Novella?
Let's clear up the confusion first. A novella isn't just a short novel or a long short story. It occupies this sweet spot between 20,000 and 50,000 words (though some argue 17k-40k). Think of classic examples like Orwell's Animal Farm (30k words) or Steinbeck's Of Mice and Men (29k).
Format | Word Count | Structural Needs | Reader Time Commitment |
---|---|---|---|
Short Story | 1,000-7,500 | Single narrative arc | 10-45 minutes |
Novella | 20,000-50,000 | 2-3 subplots max | 1.5-3 hours |
Novel | 70,000+ | Multiple complex subplots | 6+ hours |
Why does this matter? Because understanding the container determines how you pack it. When I wrote my fantasy novella Clockwork Sparrow, I realized too late I'd crammed in enough material for a trilogy. Had to kill half my darlings - ouch.
The Real Reasons to Choose the Novella Format
Good news: digital publishing breathed new life into novellas. Readers love them for commutes or bedtime reading. But why should YOU choose this format?
Novella Advantages
- Faster completion: 3-6 months vs 1-3 years for novels
- Lower risk: Experiment with genres without huge time investment
- Series potential: Launch a universe with linked novellas
- Anthology opportunities: Many publishers seek novella collections
That said, novellas have real limitations. You can't develop 12 characters deeply. My crime novella failed because I tried to include five equally important suspects. Rookie mistake.
Blueprint Stage: Planning Your Novella
Look, I hate outlining. Feels like doing taxes. But skipping this step killed my first two attempts. Now I use this minimal framework:
Essential Planning Elements
- Core conflict: One sentence describing the central struggle
- Characters: Protagonist + antagonist + max 3 supporting
- Turning points: Inciting incident, midpoint reversal, climax
- Settings: 1-3 primary locations max
How many words per section? Here's a rough breakdown:
Section | % of Total | 35k Word Example | Key Focus |
---|---|---|---|
Setup | 20% | 7,000 words | Establish status quo + inciting incident |
Rising Action | 50% | 17,500 words | Conflict escalation + midpoint reversal |
Climax | 20% | 7,000 words | Final confrontation + resolution |
Denouement | 10% | 3,500 words | Consequences + new normal |
Choosing Your Idea
Not every idea suits a novella. Ideal candidates have:
- A focused timespan (days or weeks, not years)
- Limited locations (a spaceship, not an entire galaxy)
- Emotional intimacy (character studies work great)
- Single thematic focus (betrayal, redemption, survival)
Ask yourself: Does my concept need subplots about the protagonist's childhood pets? If yes, maybe write a novel instead.
Writing Your First Draft
Here's where most people fail. They treat it like a marathon when it's actually sprint intervals. My method:
Daily Target: 800-1,200 words
Schedule: 5 days writing, 2 days rest per week
Tools: Basic word processor (+ distraction blocker!)
Mindset: Embrace the terrible first draft
Common pitfall? Editing while writing. My horror novella stalled for months because I kept rewriting Chapter 1. Solution: I started writing chapters out of order. Wrote the climax first - suddenly everything else flowed better.
Pacing Tricks That Actually Work
Novellas demand tight pacing. Try these techniques:
- Chapter Length: Keep chapters under 2,500 words
- Scene Transitions: Jump between scenes using ### centered
- Sentence Variation: Mix short punchy sentences with longer descriptive ones
- Info Dumping: Spread backstory in 50-100 word nuggets
Seriously, if your character spends three pages staring at a sunset questioning their existence, you're writing a novel.
The Revision Process Demystified
First drafts are like raw marble - revision is where you sculpt. Do these passes sequentially:
- Structural Pass (3-5 days): Check story logic and pacing
- Character Pass (2-3 days): Deepen motivations and voices
- Line Edit Pass (4-6 days): Sentence-level polishing
- Final Proofread (1-2 days): Catch typos and grammar
Create a custom revision checklist based on your weaknesses. Mine looks like this:
Issue | Check | Tool to Use |
---|---|---|
Overwriting | Cut 15% of adjectives | ProWritingAid |
Passive Voice | Search "was/were + verb" | Grammarly |
Repetition | Read dialogue aloud | NaturalReader |
Getting Feedback That Doesn't Destroy Your Soul
Early on, I handed my sci-fi novella to my mother. "It's nice dear" was her feedback. Useless. Then I gave it to a writing group member who eviscerated it. Also useless. Here's what works:
- Choose 3 beta readers: One genre fan, one writer, one "normal" reader
- Ask specific questions: "Where did you get bored?" not "Did you like it?"
- Set deadlines: "Return in 2 weeks" prevents ghosting
- Compensate properly: Trade work or pay professionals
Paid professional editing costs for a 30k word novella:
Service | Cost Range | Best For |
---|---|---|
Developmental Edit | $400-$800 | Early drafts with structural issues |
Copy Editing | $250-$500 | Later drafts needing polishing |
Proofreading | $150-$300 | Final pre-publishing check |
Publication Paths for Modern Writers
Gone are the days when novellas were publishing pariahs. Today you've got options:
Traditional Publishing
Some indie presses specialize in novellas (Tor.com for SFF, Subterranean Press for horror). Submission requirements vary but typically want:
- Completed manuscript (30k-45k words)
- 1-2 page synopsis
- Query letter tailored to their catalog
Self-Publishing
Where novellas truly shine. My romance novella earned more via Kindle Direct Publishing than my novel. Key steps:
Cover Design: $150-$400 (avoid premade covers)
Formatting: Vellum ($250) or DIY with Reedsy
Pricing: $2.99-$4.99 (70% royalty on Amazon)
Marketing: Kindle Unlimited promotions + genre newsletters
Don't underestimate the importance of categories. A mystery novella should appear in "Mystery > Cozy" not just "Fiction".
Novella Writing FAQs
Let's tackle the questions I get constantly about how to write a novella:
Can I really develop characters deeply in 30,000 words?
Absolutely, but focus on transformation rather than backstory. Show character through pivotal choices rather than childhood flashbacks.
How many scenes should my novella have?
For a 35k word count, aim for 25-40 scenes. Each scene should advance plot AND character.
Should I write in first or third person?
First person creates intimacy faster (great for novellas). Limited third person offers more flexibility.
Can novellas have sequels?
Absolutely. Many successful series use interconnected novellas (Becky Chambers' Monk & Robot series).
Common Novella Pitfalls to Avoid
- Underdeveloped ending: Rushed resolutions disappoint readers
- Novel-lite syndrome: Feels like an amputated novel
- Static characters: No meaningful growth arc
- Worldbuilding overload: Spending 10k words on imaginary politics
Parting Advice Before You Start
The beauty of learning how to write a novella is discovering what kind of storyteller you are. My first attempt taught me I'm a minimalist at heart - who knew? Start small: commit to writing 500 words about a character facing one impossible choice. Tomorrow, make that choice worse.
Novellas thrive on constraints. Embrace them. That narrow focus forces creativity in ways sprawling novels never do. And when you hit the 30k mark with a complete story? Pure magic.
Still stuck? Try writing the final paragraph first. Knowing where you're heading makes the journey clearer. Now go create something only you can write.